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09 April 2006 @ 10:14 am
Oh dear..  
Ahh, it is time for another entry for the challenge! I'm only on at this ungodly time in themornign because woek is in approximately two hours and I need to shower/eat etc. Okay, onward, lj cut don't fail me now!

Fandom: Chobits (whoo)
Pairing: Hideki/Chi

Okay, here it is!

Are You My Someone?

He found me and saved me
Gave me a life to lead
But can he learn to love a machine
Whose love will he choose to heed

We share everything with each other
Is this what couples do
Hideki and Chi are sharing...
Can Chi’s dreams come true?

This night we share
As the sky lights our way
The town comes to a still
And all I can pray
Is that we will be as one
Like we are now
Hideki, are you my someone?

I can only watch you sleeping
The one who found me
And here I lie
Wrapped in your arms, and I am free

Our blanket keeps me warm
Like your hand on mine
Protect me from the darkness
Safe for all of time

We can make it together
Just you and me forever
And you can call out my name to me
The name you gave me. Chi!

Hideki, are you my someone?


Okay, I know it isn’t great and the blanket is kinda minor to the poem...but it was a shot! Dear Lord please don’t feel the need to criticise me for this, I know it’s bad! *smiles* Suzanne, make you challenge easier lol! : S oh dear...
Current Mood: blahblah
Current Music: One More Time-Daft Punk
Envyenvyofthestage on April 9th, 2006 10:29 am (UTC)
lol! I love that! One blanket orientated line :P

That's really cute! :D :D
Suze: Luna by Potterpuff Ladyfidrich on April 9th, 2006 11:08 am (UTC)
Awww, this is so lovely. I'm really impressed, actually; poetry is tricky to pull off (which is why you won't catch me posting it online!) but this is lovely. Even if it is het. :P

(*grin* LJ-Cut saves the day!)
peterpanserpeterpanser on April 9th, 2006 03:10 pm (UTC)
Well done Jenny! You fulfilled the challenge and created a great poem! (It's so sweet!)
hutchie2006hutchie2006 on April 9th, 2006 08:54 pm (UTC)
well done jen that poem was so nice , very good i think . it really seems like something chi would think good stuff xxxx